I’m really enjoying how you’re handling this story. (Though I have to admit, I do wonder where the porn that was supposed to be in the film wandered off to.)
FYI, you’re missing a couple of “that” in the first two lines of the second frame.
As for the porn, remember that Elliot had Doc rewrite the entire thing and took out all of that except for one *big* scene… which is coming (so to speak). Thanks for the comment!!
DOC AND RAIDER 
I’m really enjoying how you’re handling this story. (Though I have to admit, I do wonder where the porn that was supposed to be in the film wandered off to.)
FYI, you’re missing a couple of “that” in the first two lines of the second frame.
Yikes! Thanks for the heads up. Noted and corrected.
As for the porn, remember that Elliot had Doc rewrite the entire thing and took out all of that except for one *big* scene… which is coming (so to speak). Thanks for the comment!!