This version is good, but honestly I preferred the first version with the punch line "next time, come alone". Reply
To be honest, I waffled between the two and finally decided there was something more surreally poignant about an ATM craving affection after a one-transaction stand. They both work, in their own way.But thanks for the comment, bud! Reply
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If hitting an ATM was this much fun, I'd be in worse financial shape…
This version is good, but honestly I preferred the first version with the punch line "next time, come alone".
To be honest, I waffled between the two and finally decided there was something more surreally poignant about an ATM craving affection after a one-transaction stand. They both work, in their own way.But thanks for the comment, bud!